Tons of potential. Loving this read. Definitely some things that could be built on and workshopped, but also some things that are amazing additions to a story that keep it alive. I love the writing quality. Feels like I'm actually holding a book instead of being on a laptop. The updates come fast and if a typo is found it is fixed quickly, almost as fast as it came. The characters and elements are explained in a detailed way that very effectively portray the appearance and mechanisms written. The world background is explained well but could be delved into more, explaining the world, how it came up, and how the economic factions exist with each other. In conclusion this is a well brought up and formulating story, and I can't wait to see where it goes.