How I lost my 1st love - Reviews

Walking around for a while Catherine couldn't find Samuel, she looked around and noticed that James, Jeremy and Nathan were engaged and having nothing else to do Catherine decided to walk to the garden for some fresh hair she was tired of being objectified.

Seiji waiting outside the elevator, worried. Happy later they could remove them safely from the elevator, which settled after his unusual technical fault I run three hours later.

''Impressive.'' Suddenly Leto smiled.

Zulfha sedikit kaget saat adiknya juga masuk dan anehnya adiknya ini menangis yah untuk pertama kalinya salsha menangis setelah kematian ibunya.zulfha panik tentu walaupun ia hanya kakak tiri tapi salsha seperti adik kandungnya.

"I want you to train me, so that I could protect my Mother and those that I care about." Millicas asked of Alex, surprising him a little. "I know that I am still a little kid and my Mom is very powerful and you care for us all, but still I want to…"

I already read all the three chapters and I'm interested to see what's going to happen next. Keep updating because I'm very curious on how the story is going to develop.

overall evrything is good sorry for being shame less?

The pace of the plot is moving too quickly, much like in the first chapter. Before diving into the story, it would be helpful to establish the world's backstory, provide descriptions of the protagonist's parents, and introduce the location where he was bullied. While the writing and grammar are strong, the rapid progression makes it difficult to connect with the character's development and the intensity of his hardships. Add a chapter exploring the bullying experience that could help to build empathy and showcase the protagonist's determination to overcome those hardship. Despite these areas for improvement, the story has great potential. Keep up the excellent work dear author

Waited months for this thing to be updated so i can binge read since it’s worthy of the title “good novels”…anyways WHERE’S THE NEW CHAPTER!!!

Up to chapter 74 it has been great, but I'm incredibly frustrated that since then ch.74-90 are repeats.

i love this novel, the way Ethan and Emily bond and their different personality makes the me keep on flipping for the next chapter. i hope the other remaining chapters are coming soon coz i cant wait to embark in their story again

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