Author here,The grammar is unedited, updates are based on my whim. The plot can be a little fast due tp wanting to progress the story. World background is not detail, but decent enough to get a somewhat image, but only if the reader are used to cultication novelsReqd it if you want, but I hope you understand that I wrote this for fun and dont take it too seriously, of course critics are more than welcome. My main goal in making this, is mainly due to having read too many similiar xianxia novels that were similar (if you know, you know). I also have some cliches in mine too and whenever I notice it in my writing I get a little sad. I want the characters to feel alive, not controlled, but something so simple is so hard.Thanks for reading
