Okay a novel with a good pace... For a novel in the fantasy genre with this kind of storyline and world building..I think your novel is doing fine...The events are well planned as one leads to another without been disrupted. The action pace are good and gives the readers enough time to absorb it and follow the MCs part ...What can I say. You wrote a marvelous novel here .Well done And of course... The bad side ??Little chapters...heheh scared you huh...So write more...WBravo brother...Well-done