Hollow Crown of the Dying Star - Reviews

        Nahihilo pa rin ang pakiramdam ni Raimer. At sumasakit ang ulo. Medyo gumigiwang pa ang paglalakad pero pinipilit na hindi mahalata.

So please cope up with this useless author of yours and many many thanks for reading my story and please do leave comments or criticize if you want beacuse everything highly appreciated as they will only help me grow.

I wake from the dream fairly disoriented, but the weakness has diminished some. While I review the dream for a second time, I realize its significance, and remind myself to tell the Captain tomorrow, knowing deep down, today is not the day to advise him. an odd feeling of nerves and dread settle into my stomach as I watch the bright sky grow dim in the morning light.

I feel like I'm evolving.

Gloria Borger

Rain cough out a bit of blood and she passes out.

Chichi felt addicted to staring at the gun, to feeling it all over, and to rub the small pocket of bullets between his fingers, but had to hide it along with his identity as he walked out. He didn't expect one thing, though.

To Ms. Eva Dimasalang, I hope that with your talent , opportunities in inventing products for the goodness and wellness of life may be produced.

I don't thinks it's good, new nobita just got transmigrated to old one, it's not even 2 days, he already fixed old nobita habits, tone and personality, Also attacking his mom rights to start is bad idea. Huge Flaw, world IQ -999, it would be good if he continued his act, or try attacking someone else.  Sigh! Other things are Gud.

finders keepers, and I so am keeping this one.please keep up the uploading.

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?