His Guard Dog - Reviews

Recalling something, Cliff headed over to the closet, opening the door and standing on his tiptoes to see the top shelf.

"Dongda Road, village chief, NPC No. 452312, request communication, is

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

"Oh, sorry!  I am Oliver Jones."

     Have you ever heard of Asylum? A prison for people like us. Which is handled by crazy people who think we are crazy.

One of the nice story.. could be more best..

The characters are goodThe story is goodThe world is interesting, even if it’s not too specialThough the writing quality could improve, it’s not exactly bad, the author just has a habit of summarizing conversations instead of showing conversations, like a show not tell thing. (This might just be an early chapter thing, idk… I’ve just read the free chapters so far)

it has nice descriptive writings but the pacing slow.i hope it will be alright in the future... ......................................................................................keep up the good work