Hibiscus tea and melancholy (poetry)
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Poetry
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Aimless.
I guess that's what I am.
There's no place I'd like to arrive at.
So that makes me aimless.
My feet start to ache.
I don't want to walk anymore.
I'm so very tired you see.
I'm urged to keep on moving.
Even if it's painful.
I want to stop and ponder.
Maybe think of where I'll end.
What will happen if my feet grow roots.
They usher me forward.
Hands pushing against my back.
I don't want to walk anymore.
Upon this dusty path.
My feet are dirty and tired you see.
Good sir, please allow me rest.
I'm urged to keep on moving.
Regardless of my health.
Since they push me to walk forward.
I guess that I'll walk sideways.
Aimlessly in the dust.
I guess that's what I am.
Aimless.

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Why so soon? It's completed now. However, I enjoyed the novel very much.
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To those of you who are scrolling in order to decide to read a story, here is a real review. Most of the bad reviews (especially the spammer of bad reviews "reign333" <-- posted multiple bad reviews on same story so a troll) don't really have any backing to them, such as the "He's too op" which can be negated by the fact that the MC is from the future thus having more powerful options. I'd like to see some of these people complain about a barbarian with a stick losing to someone with a gun because that is basically what these people are doing, of course the barbarian is gonna lose. The second reason for a bad review is the "All filler, no plot" point of view. If some of these people spent even half a second reading the synopsis, they would know that their argument is invalid. The MC traveling back in time is not going to automatically go after some enemy since the world ended of natural causes I.E sun dying. If you were a time traveler from a future where you died because there was no resources, would you automatically blame a random person you see on the street for all of that? Of course not. These reviewers think this is full of filler because the author did not pull a ultimate world ending villain out of his but and say the world ended because of him. The MC does not have a overarching goal other than to be stronger for the sake of being stronger.I would consider the story at this point in time to feel more like a slice of life hence some of the bad reviews.
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