Hero - Book One - - Reviews

It isn't like I don't have my own experiments I have worked on. Such as I have modified my dog, who by the way I named Rex. Rex is more Robot than he is dog. He still has the instincts of dog but most of his body is cybernetic. So I gave him upgrades. First off I made him completely waterproof, in fact I put a hydro chamber inside him so that when he is submerged in water it can even serve as a power source by filtering. I added Sea Stone into his metallic lower jaw so that he can latch onto Devil Fruit users. He also has a machine gun that can be deployed from his back. And I gave his tail a rapid spin function that acts like a rotor so he can move faster in water. I wanted to give him transformation abilities too but WapoMetal hasn't been discovered yet.

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Are you sure there is only one guy in there?

It was Feng Li who was shocked to see at the way he was looking at her .

He sent his workers away and waited for her outside,while he was doing that she sent a message with the Butler, to tell PJ and JB to go ahead to the banquet.

imagination, because their life is only

I love the world-building, but redundancy should be taken care of. The writing style is good, though I suggest minimizing the detailed physical descriptions of every character

This is a really good translation. Now, you have to take into account, that, as a translation, this novel will have some mistakes. Despite this, it retains readability, and is quite enjoyable. The updates are very, very quick. This same novel is on Scribblehub, but they only update 4x a week. Pretty standard Xianxia, but still enjoyable enough to zone out.