Hercules: Zeus's Cursed Champion - Reviews

I quickly escorted them towards the portal. I was impressed that they did not react with my teleportation magic. Maybe they are used to it right now. We appeared in front of them, and the soldiers kneeled when they see Erza.

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I felt sick from the memories, I quickly lean over the end of the bed and throw up. I couldn't stop myself from throwing up, I kept going till my stomach burned and there was nothing left but stomach acid. I collapse again on the bed, and slowly drift off out of conscience. Even my dreams were corrupted by this man, it kept replaying in my dreams again and again.

Lolol.since i write my life but when the waves calmed,i'll write every boring adventures that i had.

"Now you help me find Ultron, so we go and end this. Then I get that stone as far away from you as possible." As Naruto began to walk out of the barn, he finished, "After that, I think I can say with absolute certainty that we're done. You do you, I do me. But we're not on the same side anymore. If I find out you do something like this again…well, I have a team of my own now. Get it?"

Man, this is a true masterpiece in this genre, have a lot of funny moments I hope for a romance, but I don't think will have. I hope that this book have more readers. 10/10                                                              

I think you need to go a little deeper in the world's lore. BUt the story have has a lot of potential!!!!!!!!Keep goin, author! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

The language reads easy. The author describes every thing well, almost as if it's happening in front of your own eyes. If I have one suggestion - to divide up paragraphs more, as any thing longer than four sentences fills up a entire screen on mobile. Well done Author. Try the story, it's great.