Hellbound Vow - Reviews

But now the author stands in front of a problem, to develop the relationship between Hao Ren, Zhao Yanzi, and Xie Yujia, a conflict is needed between Zhao Yanzi and Xie Yujia. But that is where the problem lies, Xie Yujia has always been way to „flawless" so it would be incredibly out of character if she were to suddenly provoke Zhao Yanzi, although this would be the fastest way to create the desired conflict since Yanzi is easy to provoke. For that reason, Zhao Yanzi has to be the one to provoke Xie Yujia, and that is where the problem continues. Zhao Yanzi has a rather provocative personality as is and Xie Yujia has always been tolerating it, so she has to behave in very extreme ways, more than usual, which in turn makes everyone hate her.

Love is never dependent

But the stranger didn´t answer. Instead he made a gesture... and a large wound was ripped into one of the Devil´s bodies as the blood shot outside.

"Haha i think she did." Soryn burst into a merry hearty laugh. Zalaria had fallen asleep on soryn again. And soryn looked around the room. "Have we been drinking all day?" the candles had burned low.

I love this novel, it is a great read. However I would like to offer some feedback. It is a bit too slow almost 80 chapters and we still haven't seen much yet and almost no fights. I like the MC and the story but in my opinion you should speed up the plot a bit you don't have to do anything drastic but simply increase the speed a bit. Hope this helps❤

the story piqued my interest quite well. I like how it's developing.

Excellent novelle. Love the people. Love the techniques the characters are very good. Love the titan in particular, he's crazy. Love Haider too. Respectful. Cool guy. need more updates frequently. But,100%.