I’m already on Chapter 5, and I can say that the story flow and character building are really good. However, I do get a bit confused when the narration shifts from 3rd POV to 1st POV.All in all, you should definitely give this story a try! :3
Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?
