Heiress' Househusband is a Secret Billionaire - Reviews

Darkness started to light up little by little by innumerable starts moving around them like a firefly and formed a dazzling constellation of them....

I look at the detective he had a smirk on his face like he was agreeing with what that bastards friend was saying.

"No, but I do know you" Natsume replied

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

Cirrus shouldered his way past a short person in a cloak, knocking them aside. Cirrus made eye contact momentarily and stopped cold. It was a girl, a young one - barely old enough to be here. He was transfixed by her eyes, green around the outside and shifting to a cool good around large pupils. They burned with an intense inner fire. Silence simmered between them as she didn't break eye contact. Cirrus hesitated and then glanced away.

The concept of the story is pretty good. However, there are many grammar and wording issues in every chapter. There is also a lack of consistency and realism. A character can't be made out to be disgusted and terrified of a dead animal and then be an experienced hunter who is used to breaking such animals down. It also doesn't make sense to be capable of dissecting and breaking down an animal with no tools whatsoever.

Hi everyone I hope you are enjoying the novel, keep reading and supporting, lot more to come.