Heaven's Ruler Returns - Reviews

Aha i need more inspiration for this and how to word it, it'll be back though

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

The god decided to make that child of his come herself, for that, he went towards her personal storage and picked her favorite weapon, a spear. The thing was supposed to be the masterpiece of a now-famous smith, the guy happened to meet with her during the start of his career, the humans seem to give it a pretty good evaluation but he cannot convince himself of its apparent quality.

"Help? Ha ha ha, you're funny."

Are u you still doing the part time teacher part time arms dealer arc or is it in the way.

I really like this story so far. That take on the system genre is really unique, and I just really enjoy the atmosphere and characters. I really like Albrecht, he feels really relatable, and I really love those few moments of the comedic undertone. It's just very enjoyable all in all. I also love how the worldbuilding is slow and gradual, leaving that mystery but not dumping everything at you at once, it takes the 'show don't tell' route. The writing quality is just a bonus really. Nearly no mistakes in the grammar or whatsoever, and the paragraph structure is smooth and lets you have an easy read-through and through. I really enjoyed this story, and I definitely am going to continue reading it. All in all, 5/5, worth your time.