I'd say the book does a great job at starting off the reader excited, however, the way the scenes jump is a bit disorienting, but nonetheless good descriptions.
*scream and cry* after finding a great novel I have to wait on the chapters to update, I should have found it when it have hundreds of chapters....sighhhhh
I am not a fan of stories like this, but I think this one will make me the author no one fan. I will recommend it to everyone. It is worth reading. Keep it up, author.
