HEAVEN'S DAWN - Reviews

I guess I shouldn't be surprised, Eugene is Eugene, whether in reality or not. I heard that a single private room here costs fifty gold, and each dish is at least one gold. The food doesn't even give buffs or anything, it's just expensive! Apparently you need to be wearing formal clothes to enter, but I don't even know how to get 'formal' clothes in this game. Maybe they sell it at some store nearby, I bet it's pricey.

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Lochlann stepped around the corner and stared at Cem, "We thought you were dead!" He covered the ground between himself and Cem in three steps and grabbed him in a tight embrace.

Kai stopped for a moment and continue explaining.

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

Hands down, one of the best football web novels out there. The story is great; however, I would like it if it would focus a tad bit more on slice of life: for example, a chapter about his normal daily routine and the interactions that go into that.

Hey Cook please just make Natalia also as a female lead you don't have to make it a harem one but adding just one another will be okay right besides she completely feels so alone and she is a lesbian because of her trauma so do something to  help her through mc and get close to each other then only will the trio will feel complete. Keep up with your good work , okay sayonara ?.