Heaven falls - Reviews

Light had always been a mighty attribute, possessing great regeneration properties and endowing its user with enormous speed. However, Wolfgang had never seen anyone able to turn into intangible light particles or being able to deploy such speed in the Grand Knight Rank.

6 months later:

And all that glitters is gold

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Nice. This story has lots of potentials. First, the writing quality, though there are some typos, it didn't distract me from reading that much. Stability of updates. From what I've seen, the author has stable updates so far. Story Development. The flow of the story is nice and detailed. I don't feel anything rushed. And there are a lot of surprising events as well. Character Design. Though they say Rufus is a pushover, the author made it well to be his redeeming quality. It's just sad that Harley died as well. The other supporting characters too are likable. World Background. It is interesting.This will definitely stay in my colls and read for more. All the best to the author and the book :D

This is not a bad story; I find it creative. However, the writing and language could be better, possibly because the author had difficulty writing in English. But overall, it’s not bad at all.