He is my destiny - Reviews

"I had heard that sirens had taken a lot of souls, wouldn't it be only fair to collect the debt?" I said in an oppressive tone, making the monster tremble.

And then the doctor says.

"Don't worry, I'll make her imagine everything she ever wanted. This story will be so complex that it'll take up the whole day!" It's hands excitedly played with each other, starting to create a story.

More?

"Yes Mom, I'm awake."

I usually like to write reviews after a novel has ended or been dropped but this novel was so amazing I just had to write one now. The way the characters are written is incredible. I have never seen characters that feel so alive and like actual people. The way this is done is arguably better than experienced professional authors I've read with award winning books. Not to mention this was accomplished in only six chapters as of writing this. The world background is incredibly detailed and fleshed out albeit it was delivered in some exposition dumps that might have done better if they were spread out a bit more. I wish chapters came out more frequently because I simply can't get enough.

This is soooo good.I even learnt from the authors way of writing

157 read. the hero has very, very, very small balls ... and the most useless character is vanessa. in addition to the promotion and the raid, it could (and even should) be left behind the scenes. and yes - there is too much "sugar" in the whole story))).