He Comes At Night - Reviews

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c. High Impact Church structure

But the meteor men beg to differ

- Hyaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Couldn't endure reading  10 chapters I can understand you want to make MC underdog with a difficult life to make readers cheer and connect etc but the guy is such a loser to the point of being unrealistic. Anyone with decent intellect and logic would have done a better job than him a complete waste of cheats.

The first chapter was absolutely enthralling. The vivid worldbuilding made me feel as though I was apart of Kael’s journey, I can’t wait to read more.

can anyone suggest similar plot novels???

The world build is great in my opinion . Keep it up, looking forward to next chapters