Haunted Beauty - Reviews

"Whys would you accept a monster as citizens?"

The birth chart was personally made by The Sun God Surya himself and Karna was in awe while looking at all the planets and stars moving in his birth chart.

"Because you won't be as powerful as the other servants, I'll give you a head start through a system and two blessings. You've heard of those before right? How you use it is up to you, you can become the strongest being in that universe with [The World Over Heaven], [All for One], [Boundary Manipulation] and the like, but you'll need to earn it yourself. Or maybe you don't want to dominate the world but want something more satisfactory, like making the lives of people more fulfilling through crafts. Or maybe you want to be the best chef in the world, who knows. The system will give you the opportunity to do it. I don't believe that you," she smiled, "have the capacity for evil. So I'll leave your fate to your own decision."

In the case of emergencies, a doctor or nurse always accompanies patients undergoing rehabilitation.

"Cut the bullshit."

Wu Zixin brought her to the golf course but stopped at a far distance when he noticed a not so good activity happening in the name of golf. Seeing the bloody scene in front of him, he gulped a mouthful of saliva and cried inwardly, 'Boss, this won't be my fault if Miss. Xiu Mei had seen you like this, why didn't you warned me before?'

Average of most

1. The writing is all done in the present tense for some odd reason, and is not very good.2. The story is slow. You could read 40 chapters, and only a few days has passed.The story so far (140 chapters in) focuses on the MC in the academy. It is a powerful contender to Harry Potter, I would say, in terms of hour it grabs your interest in the lore. But, the slowness and the dragging of events as well as the bad writing plays to its detriment. It feels the MC won’t finish year 1 of school until we hit chapter 900.

Passing by .                                             .

This author is right. There is no perfect time for someone to express his or her feelings

I just read the prologue, the condition of the main character is really concerning, your writing is really neat, and the emotional delivery you give is really felt, totally realistic. keep fighting bro!