it is good, but my problem with it is that you Created a race, I know that it is powerful, but it does not make sense that you made them have few people because It is a race, and it should have more members not few, And you made it harder to recruit than other races. It is a territory, and it cannot just have a few people defending it. From what I can see, it doesn't look like this novel will go far. It looks like it would be dropped at one point because the word view has collapsed.
