Happily Never Ever After - Reviews

"Nope." (Zack)

Consecutive lightning bolts struck down.

Jiang Xiuran was thoroughly muddled by the strange things this voice, or 'System', was saying. He opened his mouth to question System.

He then looks at the other Ship Girls and sees Ryuujou and Zuihou. He then mumbles,

Putting my running shoes in by the entrance, I grab my keys and go straight to the stairs, starting my warm up with 15 floors and 450 steps; yeah, I counted; and was out on the street.

"of course! get in!" Jake said, obviously pleased with himself for some odd reason. He struck Maria as the kind of person with to many secrets to keep track of.

Every chapter gets so much more exciting, definitely wrapped in Andre! ???

I've been reading this novel since last year and the story just keeps getting better.Can't wait for Lin moyu to meet antares.The updates also regular.Translation is decent

nice work keep going I'll just reviewing it

Shouta is an exciting character. The story is too fast-paced. The plot is amazing. But I just felt like it lacked something of explanation or reaction in some parts. But I know as the story progresses, the author will improve. Continue to write and learn, author. Enjoy the journey of being a writer.

Reminds me of my old book, The Dark Demon Lord, which also attempted to create a dark character, though I failed. This book seems to succeed where I couldn't. The writing is also fantastic and something that really brings out the emotions and the story really well. Yur is also a very creative concept, a child born a slave, given the freedom he desired, yet with no goal in mind. The lack of goal vs the inability to figure out a goal are very different concepts and the author does very well looking at that. Props to the creativity and the violence shown, truly great work.

It's good. Has Potential but I hope the author will not axe this. The pacing is good. Not slow, not fast either. The world building could be improved.