Grapefruit - Reviews

"Oo? Sekarang kau yang mengatakannya. Apa kau sudah merasa hebat?"

While communicating with it, more internal information was passed through

I said yep what a concept

I thought you said you believe in soulmates and there's no harem but here am seeing three female leads

the story's really good and doesn't fall short at all compared to the authors' other stories, and my personal little favorite where the authors note at the end of the chapters as they were actually funny for once on this app, keep up the good work brotha ?

with more chapters , the writer is indeed doing a good job in character development and world building, keep it up you'll do more good cause it's always enjoyable to read your chapters.

From my perspective, author your novel has the potential, if it carefully balances character depth, suspense, and emotional stakes. Your novel has strong emotional depth and an engaging premise. It has a good pacing, it can grow fundamentally, but do consider putting synopsis to it, for further engagement to your readers, it also help them fully understand your story, just keep going author! You got this!