God's Path. - Reviews

"Damn why is this bi*ch here" thought Sam.

YOU will touch the cross no matter what and no matter the price! A guide only wins when HIS player touches he Ascension Cross."

Knowing that he did not even use up one percent of the spirit QI in the formation Zero was even convinced that today was the day that he enter Spirit gathering stage and he used the little bit of control that he now had on the formation to suck in more spirit QI from the formation.

"Alright now I will call the participants who have problems with his sexual, lets welcome,  Sangefull Jamil Nogay--it was a name," shouted Mr. Rioy.

i see what you did the updated version is better there is alot of things to note but so far the story progress is good i would love some clarification about shino abilities tho

Author has no idea how actor agencies work and how humans began.In chapter 51 There is fire people are about to day but an Actor is just making a live stream like come on ITS STRICTLY FORBIDDEN AND HE WOULD DESTROY HIS LIFE AND ACTING FUTURE EVEN MORE.And then at the same film set like what that one commenter said its fcking unrealistic to have an Idiols Manager accept that she will be staying with 2 other boys for 3 WHOLE DAYS.If one of the background extras/actors filmed it and posted it on some random social media then either the Idiols Career or the male people who are staying with her will be ruined because that sadly how korean fan culture works.And then there is the fact that a veteran actor acts like an Child.The Author really needs a proofreader and if he has ine he needs at least ro have a reader who although cures a lot but seems to be the only one giving actual feedback.