GODGEAR - JOURNEY TO SAVE EDEN - Reviews

and then another big gate opened only three of the dimensional

It was good. Although in the first chapter you spelled bawling wrong.

While Xi Mo was marveling at the change of his body, he suddenly felt a burst of Spiritual Essence from the cave even though he already completely absorbed the Spiritual Lake, so he gets curious and excited and rushes in the direction he felt it from.

And all that glitters is gold

Nana huffs and puffs but still ate the meal. Ping promised to make her a batch of cookies, it was the main reason Nana ate actually.

The f is this? This needs serious editing.

Good writing, author ?✨Just the first two chapter and it's hooking.