I can say the story is going well and interesting, I can see the author is putting her best. Although, the chapters are short but I don't have a problem with that. Also, a connection with the character and story would be amazing, although the story is starting, we want more suspense, action and something that would keep us wanting more. I hope Crystal, would be able to overcome the trials as the story proceed. Kudos author and Good luck. To everyone - Give the story a try ? let's go!!!