From Supermarket Clerk to Fake Fiancee Mafia - Reviews

I so much love the plot. A great book. kudos to the author.

This Webnovel has only just started, but thus far it's been enjoyable. The author has a good grasp on language and the way he sets up and deals with a rather generic set-up is refreshing and feels very real. He has a good grasp on how he wants to tell his story and I feel his style lends itself to writing a battle story like this. Can't wait to read more.

Why has this been on privileged for four months?!                                                                                       

The MC is the slave of the system and the gods. Why would anyone help someone else to become strong to rule them. That's just plain stupid. Why would anyone want to live like that. He just should had killed himself at least should've free from this bull****.

I rarely meet something so bland and boring.The plot is so simple, punch lines are bland, story development is nonexistent.Mc just keeps repeating squander prodigal super prodigal as if he is retarded.

Ch.26I am struggling to not stop reading this novel right now. Spoiler ahead:(For Max)If you are that angry with Jamie, why would you go and console her? I wouldn't even care about her anymore. First the unreasonable fists and now stupid mental breakdowns.IRL I hate this kind of people and now in a fictional world, I deal with them. Tch!I will give a little more chance and then probably drop this.Though, F for the author. He made me real angry with a fictional character.

Kind of expected more of LoHP’s author because since this novel’s MC is basically Zhang Xuan but worse. The novel feels like its going to be a cycle of cliche and repetitiveness.

from a first look, it's an extremely familiar overall worldscape (vr capsules, haptic feedback for training purposes, time dilation, a weak MC who flukes out, etc), however the author fleshed those out in rather intriguing ways, the only downside, I'm guessing the author isn't confident in English and for some reason doesn't use any grammar or spellchecker features, which I can almost guarantee will break any immersion the intrigue built up... that said, I was hooked until 150 and that's only because the author clearly and obviously hasn't realised that's an earlier chapter... which worries me because people were reading it before me and apparently they didn't notice...

MEEP! MEEP!I feel like this story is a good one for many reasons. The first reason being the writing quality as well as the story and the characters. I find the MEEP a really fun character that I hope to see in almost every chapter. I also like how well the characters are described, and frankly like the prose in the story quite a lot.The author seems really good at descriptions and also at characters judging his dialog and the quality of his work. Feels like reading a real translation, but a bit higher quality grammar wise.

The sypnosis got my good novel sense tingling and a reincarnation vrmmorpg novel is great combination just like "Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God" and "The World Online"

Can already smell the cringy, beta, and generic japanese mc....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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