Fragments of Divinity - Reviews

"We play pinochle sometimes - he's teaching me the basics," Amirah says earnestly.

The 7 assassins suddenly had their faces contort as their bodies were split into pieces while Lin Feng appeared behind them out of nowhere. Smiling savagely under his mask, Lin Feng dashed towards a nearby assassin and pierced his chest with his sword, causing blood to spurt everywhere.

Reason: Don't like where this went, I had completely fucked this novel up with plot holes bigger than the shattered moon in Remnant. I had an mc that was erratic with little explanation about him even if I was going to do that later, I didn't plan anything and was writing on the fly, I fucked up just about everything, and I wrote a new novel that I got hooked and now wanna incorporate that in this novel.

"Jadilah kekasihku, Aya Park," ucap Jaehyun dan membuat Aya tersedak.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

Later Mini and Chif went to chif's cabin

"Jester brings me a potion of kindness."

Hello dear Author! First I would like to say, that you have created an amazing story. I am exceedingly thrilled, thinking of where you will take this in the future. I gave every category 5 stars, except update stability. Now, I am not one to complain without first considering a solution. May I propose doing a release one day of the month, and you could drop four big chapters. Heck maybe even five, if it was a good month lol. This way we as readers could receive more stability. Thank you again for this wonderful story! Keep up the great work. Respectfully,A Big Fan

I'm really excited about how Jeff life would turn out! can't wait for more

Iam new to Webnovel and this is my 1st webnovel that I ever read. And iam loving this.

Nice story so far, i think the author is doing an amazing job here

Ain't gonna lie, cuz, this is a straight fire romance novel! Your plots always on point, and your writin' skills got a major upgrade, fo shizzle. Both your main characters got some real depth, with they own ideologies and whatnot. Only thang I'ma say is, work on buildin' that world, 'kay? Got me hyped for morechapters,G!