"LAND YOUR MOUNT NOW BEFORE WE FIRE UPON YOU!" boomed the voice from earlier. Several eagle-like creatures approached, each with a uniformed man on the back. Several were wielding tools that resembled guns.
"Yeah... you two will. Before that pick what you want, you can't see him again if you will die on starvation" Josh said. Automatically the girl wipes her eye's and see the menu. Her eye's shine again but became a hesitant to order.
For a first timer to write a novel like this is really a great start ? the story development so far is really nice, I am really excited to see what' coming up ahead
It's not bad but after 130 chapters we still don't know why the title include "necromancer" I suppose it's his future class but author spoiled it too early.
I would have rated it more had you only joined the Supreme Side, not Strongest. Strongest is overrated bruh haha! Joking! Looks good, good luck in your endeavor and may lots of readers check it out!