Forbidden Enemies - Reviews

Overall, the story development is good, with no harem and no faceslapping, (It is rare to find an Urban Novel with no faceslapping)A Good Novel, but not too many chapters. Considering it was uploaded today it is preposterous of me to say that, but it is good...

                      He sat himself down and took a nap. After twelve hours, he woke back up and stepped up to the next step. He felt nothing at first, but then... his body started to convulse

"What the fuck was that!" I said, looking around the dark room.

"When are you coming home?" not wanting to sound pushy. "This is the second Christmas that we are away from each other," I sadly said.

Peter:dude kwento ka naman about doon sa sorpresa ni mommy mo?

Carlo:woooohhhh!!!

"Sebenarnya kenapa sih, aku udah sempet denger juga loh kabar-kabar dari orang sekantor kamu dikatain macam-macam karena sering banget nolak cowok cowok yang dekat ke kamu"

"He said, my master bites the hand of Okran rejecting him... but what does that mean?"

'Now it can go on, to the next bear.'

Chief Brent was surprised with Daniel's quick victory at first but when he saw Daniel wink at Detective Carter he was annoyed as he thought Daniel belonged to one of those soldiers who are careless , attention seeking show off's and love huge audience no matter where they are and what they are doing. it's soldiers like this that think they are some kind of hero and disobey direct orders and put the mission and life's of his comrade in jeopardy.

"It would be strange if it wasn't so, no?" Her eyes shone with love as she met the sleepy eyes of the baby she held, "But you are just a precious, my little Li'er. Don't worry. I know that your Baba won't be as loving with you as he'll be with Long'er, but Mama promises to love you just as much."

Nice novel lllllllllkkkkkkkgdhjgfjkrfh