Forbidden Desires: Heir of the Dual Cultivation God - Reviews

these two are so adorable!! i'm loving them! excited to see where this trilogy goes

its my first review i am saying this it's really good ?story. After reading ?more than 40 chapters i really like the mc for not acting like fool

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When I saw this novel for the first time I thought, 'this will be an interesting read', and is was, but the English was so terrible that I had to drop the story.This book has many typos, the author has no idea of the concept of past tense, or grammar in general.I had to correct every sentence in my mind just to make this novel a readable one.... Although I haven't read much, this book could have been an excellent one, a shame the author doesn't know how to write.

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Poor writing and translation quality. Things you get to know about the world contradict previous information. Around Chapter 18 is already the first missing chapter. Nothing original or new about this so far. Not worth anyone's time.

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Unique plot and storyline, use of words is beautiful, and character development is superb. Five stars without effort ‼️

grammar is awful, punctuations are lacking, spelling errors are as abundant as a field of flowers.some cringy moments                       .

it will definitely different from other Kingdom building novels .you should try it .

interesting story.I can't wait to see how James story develop. The grammar need more work, but other then that the story is very captivating. I will definitely be back for more. good luck with your story

Writing Quality: The author describes the scenes vividly. His/her vocabulary is vast, I spotted little to no redundant words.Story Development: It was all good. But the opening is quite cliche, I often read on those old generation novels. Tho, it wasn't a bad thing. The author almost perfectly done what's needs to be done on the first 3 chaps. Like, reader's substitution to the MC. Letting us know the circumstances, the world building, and so on.Character Design: The MC is Multidimensional. His character was done well. As for the side characters, it's easy to imagine how they are like. The way the author describes their traits is commendable.Updating Stability: Not badWorld Background: It was interesting! Especially his new family and the hints. Overall: From the scale 1-10, this book scored 8. It's not bad!