Forbidden Crush - Reviews

"Alright, we promise but don't do it now, wait till the last possible moment to do it, It will buy us all time"

"What's your game here?"

        The officer then told him, "Well, what you did there was dangerous. Even though you know how to fight, you should let professionals do the fighting. After all, you're still a student, so you don't have the proper papers to be a hero."

" kamu istirahat saja, biarkan aku membuatmu bubur" kata chen dan langsung pergi kedapur.

"Mm, thanks," I made a quick exit.

You'll never know if you don't go

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

But Gyanendra was unable to control the nation and government so he was forced to leave after a democratic movement in year 2006. A stable government was finally born and they made their constitution in 1-2 years and the government removed every power that the royal family possessed.

great story and execution. there is not a lot like it on this site

Fellow Daoist really takes his time to humanize every chapter making it feel like a proper read, much appreciated.Fellow Daoist really takes his time to humanize every chapter making it feel like a proper read, much appreciated.

There is no nice way to put this: This writer is barely literate. They have no idea how to write a complete sentence, let alone a complete thought. It was nigh impossible to understand just the first paragraph of the story. Please, people, I beg of you: You do not have to "publish" your story just because you wrote it. Learn how to write first. Keep writing and keep reading--really, I'm encouraging you to keep it up--but you can't honestly expect people to enjoy your story if you write at the level of a 3rd grader.

I really liked it. Keep going. I have never seen such action and such rich events in 7 chapters in my entire life. The first 7 chapters are always boring, but perhaps these are the best first 7 chapters on the platform. Don't despair. Keep going.