I really enjoyed your novel; it's captivating, and the fast-paced battles are something I truly appreciate. However, the atmosphere is sometimes a bit too gloomy. Adding a touch of dark humor here and there could help lighten it up. Also, some explanations could be clearer. For example, when Aria first told the story, I had trouble understanding it, and it wasn’t until the second explanation that everything made sense. But overall, I loved your novel! I’m also looking forward to your thoughts on La Légende du Grimoire, Les Mages du Zodiaque, and Entre l’ombre et la lumière, as well as La Destinée d’une Reine. Feel free to share them with your friends so they can check them out and leave their thoughts—I’ll do the same for you!
