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lord of the mysteries inspired so the background is good waiting to see how it goes prety good so far.
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Really great job! The author created a really good story and character!
I really like MC and the world he got into.
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Author-san I loved your first work and I will ask something about this novel. Will there be a romance in it? Good work keep it up author
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I don't know who you are or where you are but out of manyyy webnovels that I have read this one is piece of art the story Is awesome and the sense of mystery and interconnectivity of characters it's fabulous
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I am not one to be intrigued by game worlds or those stuff but the way you wrote this book was really simple and easy to understand .

You have a vivid imagination of what you are writing and you display it very well.

You also have the tendency to repeat words like in chapter 1, you kept in repeating MIND whereas you can interchange with the synonyms of mind.

And this genre is not fantasy, it should sci-fi or another.
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A good premise. Need more chappies!

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