Fig. future generations will not give up

The grammar is making it hard to keep up with the story. I get really confused at times on who is talking and why? I like the storyline though, a lot.

Your books are very good and recommendable,I  love your series on the 7 Gold Life's family,I can read this series over and over without getting tired of their stories. Countine your great work you're are a really good author. Love all your books.