Feather of Fate: Eightfold - Reviews

Within the room Sera sighed again. Sean took her into his arms and consoled her.

'Call me girl' Said Daph, one of her bestfriends.

Never! Never! Never!  Never! Never!

A lead in to your standard rich guy good girl romance story. It's up to a very good start. Plot is consistent and the characters are relatable.

So far so good, I can’t wait to see where it goes!

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Let's goo, imagine the 100th run on Royal Road but with a competent evil mc instead of a goody-two-shoes. Also, the power system seems to be inspired from Omniscient Reder's Viewpoint and Undying Immortal System.

The grammar has drastically improved from before, but it definitely needs more refining. I'd suggest getting an editor to further refine the novel and increase immersion. Additionally, for personal improvement, try using grammar editing apps such as Grammarly. Buying Grammarly premium will definitely further refine your writing and maybe teach you some more grammar. That aside, the novel is highly interesting and engaging. I'd suggest having the MC improve his battle power, but that's about it.

story is good so far  , and it is unique i guess .not like all where you reincarnated in novel and will go to academy and try to follow the plot but in reality you mess with the plot