Fated Rival of the MoonTitle: "Fated Rival of the Moon" - Reviews

There's a manga about it on mangatoon called eel man. If he can only transform into eel the story would become extremely limited and can't break the 500 mark or it gets super boring cause hire me call me protect you after over 9000 times SUPER boring

Absolutely terrible story dude doesn’t even start cultivating in a cultivation novel until chapter 50 something   Author makes the MC dumb and he litterly acts like a 5 year old. Author gives characters power that they shouldn’t even have with there status and honestly doesn’t explain have the **** that goes on if you read this you will lose brain cells I tried to read through it but it’s soo bad don’t do what I did and continue on

I really like thos book so far im on chapter 34. keep it up. the only thing is that he should have kept the king and Queen werewolfs and turned them and put them in his world this way he would have been able to grow them in there and have a pack of wolves that are strong that could help in that anytime and as for the bird he needs to definitely beat it and put in it place hes being way to nice to it all it does is cause trouble for him and realistically you should just get rid of it it's not doing anything or helping him and why did the princess get the tiger and keep it she said sh found ot for him but kept it. And I think he should get theost powerful baby animals and pain them and put them in the world and there should be one of each male and female American breed and have family and grow and then this way if you ever needs help they can help him but he needs to find a way to bind them to him. I hope the author reads this and replys

Wheres the comedy tag? I'm getting some good laughs. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Love this story… I just wish it was more chapters at once… I want to know all about Dylan and Eren and them reuniting and how they take down Rogan together with her brother, Micah, and Roane(Gabriel). As well as Gabriel ending up with Lecia? More chapters soon please…..

Akihito didn't think twice before nodding. Asami did many things but he would never harm him. Sure, the spanking hurt but Akihito knew that Asami wouldn't do it if he sincerely disliked it.

"Is anyone there?"

"aku temenin mereka mandi dulu lah gak mau ngerepotin mama"

"Kou you said he is not your can I take it as he is also not you boyfriend right so I can go out with him?" Natsume said and smiled

So much to do, so much to see