FATED COLLISION - Reviews

From the looks of the three clustered, they weren't trying to free the single occupant, who huddled in the middle of the cage, as far as possible from any of the walls. He didn't see much more of the situation after that; he closed to fighting distance in a half-dozen lunging strides, launching himself into the back of one of the three surrounding the lock-picker and hitting with his feet, but one fact stood out in his mind.

"*sigh* Okay. In the manual, it says that if we go to toturial, we are goin to train by our self only, but ofcourse with the help of the npc instructor that is assigned to us, so it means that you are training without a company excluding the instructor... And according to the manual, for those players who want to spend time training with their friends, the only way is to form a party. Simply means that if we want to train with us together. Well this is the solution." Giving them a proper explanation as if I know everything.

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Well, the usual, a powerful but at the same time boring protagonist, what's the point of being a god if you're going to pretend to be normal? Now about the grammar, I don't have much to say, I read it through the translator. The world building is good, better than many authors, the development is slow, but not suffocating. Plot: 4.5 generic MC: 2.5 boring World building: 10

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new chapter is epic just giving the review back then of the old book!