Fatal Shot - Reviews

The Legendary Mechanic

Thanks for cluing me in on the alternative definition of the word. Although your passive-aggressive tone was a bit off-putting, it has helped me understand the context and usage of the term. For that, I thank you. However, your assumption that I've only read prior ecchi-related content is quite jarring, as I have never touched upon the genre before. I won't attribute it to personal psychological projection, as that would be presumptuous of me. With all being said and done, it gave me quite a good laugh.
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The point is that translations should allow for readability and not sophistication. You can't assume everyone who reads here has an Oxford dictionary on hand or is majoring in English. It's quite puzzling to encounter a key component of spermatogenesis or gametogenesis suddenly. Lastly, get your mind out of the gutter, dude. Not everyone who knows the word 'c*m' got it from some perverted source. That's just a fundamental attribution error.

I suggest reading this as a brain cleanser for all the horrible thought-lacking novels that we probably all read edit: up until chapter 330 and the grammar becomes a bit bad, but it recovers later on.

Though I’m not really keen on cross references, But it is fantastic to read so far I would rate it as a 5 for character development, World-Building and Character thoughts.

I agree with your comment, But I do think that magic is a bit over used, I feel like I read countless novels with magic involved to the point that it drives me insane; I would consider this novel a refreshing experience.

The main protagonist is not smart. As such, the main protagonist does not make good decisions and that contributes to a bad reader experience. For instance, the main protagonist acts really clever in certain situations, but really dumb in other situations as though he was never clever.

Lots of inconsistency in main protagonists character

It has been 2 weeks since the last time a chapter was updated. Why have the chapter updates stopped? Did the novel go on hiatus? What happened?

Someone tell me what is going on!

Why did the updates stop??
Anyway the book is great while some arcs last a bit 2 long it is still enjoyable . The characters are interesting and the world doesn’t revolve around the Main char

I do not have the whole idea of the story but the game is so dumb. Who can ever play a game like this . This is really a bad one and I really do not like it. It's kind of exaggerated too

Bit of a slow start so far with a lot of information that is kind of out of nowhere without context. Likely stuff that will be cleared up within the first 100 or so chapters, but honestly this is the reason I think with these new novels they should release with a minimum 100ch backlog immediately. It really hurts them in the short term, since people are impatient and want something decent and new to read right away. It also means the early reviews like mine tend to be a bit on the low side due to lack of information and depth story-wise to give it anything better. I simply can't right now, however I will obviously edit my review in later chapters if it picks up.

NOVEL IS GOOD. CHARACTER PROGRESSION IS GOOD. SOME CHAPTER ARE SLOW BUT ITS OK. SO WHAT NOW AUTHOR-NIM? STILL ON HIATUS? ILIKE THE NOVEL SO PLEASE CONTINUE. LOL

I do not have the whole idea of the story but the game is so dumb. Who can ever play a game like this . This is really a bad one and I really do not like it. It's kind of exaggerated too

When is the translation going to continue??????? ????????? ??????? ??????? ???? ????? ????? ??????????????????????? ?? ???????????? ????? ??