Too many grammatical errors and passages that did not have coherent words. Pronouns are used wrong but that is expected when the story is translated. So enough with the bad, I cant spoil the story so the MC is interesting. He seems to be living a double life. One life is good while the other is horrible. But he does not enjoy either one. He can't be really happy. But it is interesting to see that he is making the best of his situation. He may be overpowered but this power can not make his situation better until later on! Great start would rate higher, but I have my reservations.
