This is awesome!
The writing quality is great. It was flawless. There were so many lines that could be made as quotes. The way Lorn sees life is on point.
I loved where the story began. The story was developed in a way that could attract readers immediately.
Since it's a video game-related novel, we can expect a very good world development as the story progress.
Also, Lorn is pretty much an attractive character.
It was a good read for me. I have already added this to my library and will continue reading to know what will happen to Lorn in the future.
Keep up the good work author!
I wish you the best of luck!