I have to talk about the dialogue in these chapters because the author has given every character a distinctly different voice and it's genuinely impressive.
Let's start with Lu Cheng. The man says approximately three words per sentence and somehow communicates everything. "My wife is pregnant." "To buy some brown sugar." "And two taels of cured meat." "No." "Thank you. I'll bring the rabbits in a few days." That's it. That's his entire dialogue in the midnight scene. And yet we know exactly who he is: a man of few words, practical, devoted, not interested in fuss. His silence speaks volumes, and the author uses it brilliantly. When the old woman says "Don't tell me you haven't even caught them yet" and he just says "Mm," admitting he hasn't caught the rabbits he promised to trade — that single syllable tells us everything about his character. He doesn't make promises he can't keep, but he also doesn't make excuses.
The old couple, on the other hand, are a study in contrast. The old man is warm and practical: "Congratulations! That's wonderful news, Xiao Cheng! Your wife coming from the city to our countryside wasn't easy—you must take good care of her!" The old woman is sharp and quick-tempered: "So your wife's pregnant—what are you doing here in our house then? Nearly scared me to death—I almost lost half my life!" But then she softens: "He's a sincere boy. His wife is blessed." And then immediately back to sharp: "Old man." "What now?" This back-and-forth feels absolutely real. These are people who have been married for decades and know exactly how to push each other's buttons.
Lin Yufen's dialogue is the most revealing. She's constantly performing, constantly trying to shape how others see things. When she talks to the educated youths, she's careful to present herself as concerned and moral: "If Lu Cheng keeps spoiling her like this, give it a year and she'll be completely out of control." But her internal monologue is different — it's bitter and personal: "After all, I raised those siblings, and when they wanted to split the household, I had no say." The gap between her public and private voice is where the real character lives.
Wen Yan is interesting because she's almost silent in these chapters. She speaks once: "A capitalist's granddaughter? So she was sent down?" And then later: "If they keep eating like this, no matter how deep their family savings, they'll soon run dry." But her silence is louder than her words. We know she's calculating, that she's observing, that she's planning. Her few lines are carefully chosen to sound reasonable while actually advancing her own agenda.
Liu Jilan is the sweet one, the naive one, the one who just wants to be polite. Her dialogue is simple and warm: "Brown sugar is really precious. I was planning to bring some, but my mom couldn't even bear to part with it. Yet Lu Cheng actually made his wife brown sugar eggs for breakfast—he's really generous." She's the moral compass of the group, and her innocence makes her a contrast to both Lin Yufen's bitterness and Wen Yan's calculation.
The village women's gossip is perhaps the most entertaining dialogue in these chapters. They talk about Gu Yueqian's fairness, about Lu Cheng's devotion, about what happens "at night" — all while pretending to be harmless. The bawdy joke about Lu Cheng and his wife is delivered with such casual confidence that it's funny rather than crude. These women are the chorus of the story, commenting on the action, shaping the social narrative.
And Gu Yueqian's internal voice — what we get of it — is restrained but observant. She notices things. She calculates. She doesn't speak much but she's always processing. When she thinks "This man..." after realizing Lu Cheng went out at midnight for her, that trailing thought is perfect. It's everything she feels and can't say.
The author's narrative voice is also worth mentioning. It's warm, observant, occasionally humorous, never judgmental. It describes the village women's sun-reddened cheeks as looking "just like old rustic paintings" — that's a line that could only come from a narrator who genuinely appreciates the beauty in these people's lives, even their hardships.
Every character sounds different. Every character has a purpose. And the dialogue never feels forced or expository. It's natural, it's revealing, and it's genuinely entertaining.