Faded Ties - Reviews

A knock was knocked on the door

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

"Remember, I'll always be watching you." He whispered.

This novel is very good so far, word building is great, main characters feel human, there is actual lore and the development is great, I am willing to bet that this story will become much better later on, but as of right now, I like it, good job author.

There aren't many system GLs out there, and even fewer in the ABO world. That's why when I find a romance this good with these elements, I absolutely fall in love with it! And I'm really enjoying following your story—it's truly amazing.

This book lacks some realism like the MC’s last life she was betrayed by someone close to her and almost died but when she got a second chance she was so trusting to people she met for a few hours? Usually their is trauma from being betrayed by someone you trust! Also when the team of four people were training they never met a monster at all? How is that realistic when the whole city is supposed to be crowded with them? Also they explain the training again the second time like they never did it the day before? Like she had to personally teach them again but shouldn’t they know from what they previously trained in? It just seems so unreal and fantasy with some plot holes here and there. And the characters don’t seem all that fleshed out and is just there to be in that role without any extra feelings! I also didn’t see MC train much because she was helping them so how is she going to improve when she is still in her younger body without any of her reflexes, muscle memory, or even instincts? I mean they trained for a whole week and ran for an hour to the designated area for training but never met a monster does that make sense?

Wow this is a very fresh story something new.