Shortly after this emotional pain, we arrived at the park. It was a Saturday so there were a lot of people in the park but my enhanced eyes picked up 3 figures that made my temples pound with annoyance.
"Those bastards! I knew they were too quiet so this was their plan. I will crush them I was plotting against the wrong enemy!" June angrily shouts while slamming his hand on the table causing it to break.
I'm not gonna lie, this is a good story! I like the 1st person POV, because i wrote story using that too. I'm amazed the way you describe the MC feeling. I'm going to read it again..
