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But because it was taking a bit of time to charge it, Kiba had already gone in and chopped off the monsters two limbs with two swell slashes.

You're going to be a Dad. I hugged him.

You'll never know if you don't go

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

"Yes Ms. Jordan." Rachel playfully responded with a fake salute.

Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further

I enjoyed reading this. The dual system is a nice twist from conventional novels! Imo the pacing was good, it didn't feel overly detailed and boring, nor did it feel too rushed. I like that they have to slowly develop their emotions overtime rather than quickly gaining an op system right away. Currently the characters and their personalities are clear with little or no confusion, so that's good! I really enjoyed reading this and hope to see more of it in the future

make mc absolutely insanely handsome by awakening somthing inside him and it will make more impact on his villain side when he goes to any place female leads will have attraction towards mc so those son of heaven will have jealousy towards mc. and it will make story more believable or it won't after all female leads  won't get attracted to just good looking guy after all they are always played by fate