every random story I'll write - Reviews

"Serpent." Atlas looked up. "Do you know of a person called Vanellope?"

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

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The story starts off very interesting ,but thats it.the main character is kind of a beta with no spine or control over his own life.its a harem in name only because the women run his life with no actual relations

I love the book, especially the main character Laura! You guys should really read it you'll love it. Bring out more episodes author

It's a really good storie with many twists and epic Moment's.I hope you make more of it and continue.

hi for the author and the readers.superb story

Fantastic world built and a strong plot. I love the characters and their interactions. The flow of the chapters is pretty engaging that I didn't feel bored at all. Though punctuation corrections at some places should be taken care of. Definitely a worthy one to add to your library.

I found this book very interesting to read. It’s full of twist and adventure with a mature theme.I can’t wait to continue reading this book to find out if Axel and Maria get together and also about the Cousin Luis and his dark outcome.

Author Note,Hi Mr.Oatmilk here, this is my first work and I hope all of you will enjoy the story! Please support the work if you like it :)