Entwined Fates: A Love written in Stars - Reviews

the writing is not very good but the story is good.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

It is a very interesting story , but overly long. And the ss are pricy. Also zi has a beyond spoilt character. I really was enjoying the story until demands for ss. I feel with a story that takes so long to get to important details, it should be cheaper so one can enjoy the story

Author is mad racist                                                                                                                 

For what it is, this is a funny as well as well thought out story.  The main character has development and evolves as he goes through the trials of surviving his escape from the dungeon and learning how to free himself from his contract as an undead.    This was a great idea to take the dungeon and bring it out from the Undeads point of view.

great sm*t novel grammer is bad sometimes all over nice novel

The Protagonist is so cool!World Building is amazing..and tbh her personality is perfect (Ruthless and Merciless towards her enemies and super kind towards her own people)FOUND A GOOD FIND

Very intrigued to see where this will go. The writer’s sense of detail when portraying the subject is keen. My only critique might be off of how forward some of the introduction is. Keep up the great work!

Ares nodded and drew close to Bellona who accelerated forward in an instant. The image of the Aquila above her shoulders took flight and into the sky, revealing the laurel banner of Rome in its red and golds.

"baiklah pih".

Mark :sure dream on

"I would like to get a permit," I said.

"You called him already? How much time do I get?" Max asked frowning slightly, annoyed. He must find the place Ron hiding before Van Helsing come here, after that what does he do with those vampires, he didn't care.