Elara, a telepath (Original version) - Reviews

Hideyoshi:"nah...its fine, right now need to take care after you"

Looking at the depressed looking face of Zuko Yue couldn't help but to burst into laughter

"Well, glad you could join us," Raul said, quickly motioning for them to sit down. "We lost precious minutes of meeting time, because of your lateness."

Amir: "…"

As Yuuichi laugh he thinks to himself:

Pls update?

I need to get myself away from this place

It's good. Don't let chapter 36 (if I dont remember wrongly) fool you, even though this chapter may disappoint you with all the soul crystal thing, dont drop the novel yet. It will become better. The only critic I would make is: the mc is not a villain so the title is misleading and all the plot exposed in the synopsis (three souls in a body and all that stuff) appears only around chapters 100-130 (and is explained quite poorly tbh).The chapters are too short and have a lot of useless information. There is no character development. Even though the mc went trough a lot of things and "mental breakdowns" there is no difference between him before the mental breakdown and after that. These mental breakdowns and "lessons" just serve the purpose of making you believe that the main character is growing, but he still acts and thinks the same way.Anyway, the novel is entertaining if you can ignore or overcome the points mentioned above, so that's all that matters I guess

I really like the novel. Its a fairly interesting take on the game developer novel type and is by far my favorite out of the game developer novels i’ve read. Really enjoy how the mc is «interacting» with the cultivation world. :)

Thestory is full of holes. And there is no chaptet to do world building. The names of the places turn into chinese and somehow the magical world becomes chinese. Somehow huaxis also exists and the names of peoole might start in english but i have the feeling that it like western names in a western starting world turning slowly into ancient china. Its makes you confused without reason.Its making my head hurt. I will read something else especially because the fun parts are skipped all the time

One of my best favorites BL novels! The MC is just so cool and ML too. Not to mention our cute little fox pet! Love how MC is (somehow) mysterious and the progress of the story is just so love it! Wonderful book! Love it a lot!!❤️❤️?????????????❤️❤️

For me, this novel is my ideal kind of novel, the mc experiences the real definition of a Rebirth. (None of that, I have past life cheats kind of bs)