Eighties: The Cold-Faced Officer is Tamed by a Delicate Beauty - Reviews

a review for the 5 exp points.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5 star support local ina mo author kekekekekekekekekw

it's good because it's funny. there are few r18 scenes but more should come. fortunately not much fighting until now. hope it stayscthat way. keep up the good work.i wouldn't be mad if you released 2 chapters a day ?

While I’m a fan of TDG fanfics this isn’t one that i’ll be reading, the MC is basically already a GOD by chapter 2 and insists on playing second fiddle to Nie Li.

This is one of those rare occasions where I can appreciate both the story AND the author!The story itself was fairly linear to start, but that quickly changed...Why did it change?I'm glad you asked!BlueLighttotheWest genuinely cares about the readers and listens to the comments. He also responds to the comments which is a nice change of pace!Thanks to this ****** fact, a good stort became a great one!So for those of you who are judging this novel by the first bit of the story, please take me at my word and trust that this story gets better and better as it goes on.So then, the by the numbers review:-Writing Quality: 4/5. For those of you doubting this, just keep reading. Our author is growing along with our MC!-Stability of Updates: 4/5. Life happens and we're only human. Sh*t happens! When life doesn't give the author flu-shaped lemons, the chapters keep pouring in!-Story Development: 5/5. I gave a 5 for two reasons; the first being the exceedingly fast pace at which the MC and story escalates, as well as the fact that BlueLighttotheWest listens and has enhanced the plot as he learns more about writing this sort of novel and it continues to grow magnificently!-Character Design: 5/5. This one should be obvious to the actual readers, but for those who haven't had the chance yet, our MC is unique and has great depth, not to mention the potential for so much development! He literally starts as a baby! The only way to go is up!-World Background: 4/5. The missing star is only the fauly of this type of story. The world changes very quickly and there is little time to stop and smell the roses, so to speak. Otherwise, the imagery is well done and the universe is pretty well organized.So overall, 4/5 stars. Though to be honest, the story is only increasing in readability. There was one moment where I started to feel the story was about to go downhill. Immediately after having that thought, there was an shift in the environment which immediately brought me back in.For those that felt this review was too long and didn't read it and just skipped to the end etc...Read this. It's great. :)

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Very good story but would like faster chapter update please ????????????????????????? I liked the story ????????????????????

Character development is pretty good, although the storyline has yet to fevelop fully. Hope it won’t take too long ◡̈

Archer job is to hit the monster from long distance and for axe warrior to hit in short distance. I support the team and affect.  Warrior job is to hit the monster in short combat and try to damage.

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