out had been the catalyst that made her heart thrum within her chest painfully. Beating in such a way that it sent painful ripples throughout her whole body.
She smiled again, Kelan ko kaya makikita itong ngiti ulit ng aking mahal? Nahiga kami sa may inilatag na kumot. Ginawa niyang unan ang aking mga braso habang nakatingin kaming dalawa sa kalangitan.
The characters are introduced and devolp in a terrible way. Every explination about his knowledge is basically “magic” and because hes rhe main character. Also the authors Syntax almost gave me an aneurism trying to read his story without speedreading to force my brain to autocorrect the grammer.
What is this nonsense get it off my screen please, this is pointless and silly. ……………………………………………………………………………………////……._________Jentntjdnnfkemnduejtngkiwnejififnfkcihsnrkfishnfifuebfjufjrjfhfhfjkdkdjfjcjf
No matter who you are, if you have read this, feel free to leave any comments—I am happy to engage with you. I also hope you can share your thoughts and suggestions about my story. - from the author.
