Author kidnapped my entire blood line and said he would never let them see the light of day again if I didn't leave a 5 star review ???Other than the threats every other chapter great story and the character development is great the protagonist is not some brain dead guy and actully remembers his abilities ??and he actual develops meaningful connections with the female leads (impossible??) one of my favorite reincarnation novels ???
Well the story is good, nice try for a newbie author. can't wait for more updates, keep going.i would like to comment on your narrative skills, its really good too though you will really need to work on it.